A rarity this time, I actually had the idea first, then set about finding the right picture to go with it. Originally I was trying to find a picture that would suggest a woman who was going door to door, but I simply couldn't find the right image. Ultimately, I settled on this picture, with some edits to the story to suit it. I also did some editing to the photo itself, something I don't normally do, since I'm usually quite crude at it. But in order for it to suit the text it was necessary. I had also originally planned to follow through with a much more descriptive ending of the acts performed, but it felt too forced, like it was extra baggage tacked on. In the end I decided to trim it down.
i loved it great work you filled it out so well
ReplyDeleteI thought it was very creative, something that could be a fun continuing series of situations. Excellent work.
ReplyDeleteVery nice use of the image and a great premise. Also, nice addition with the dirty cap below it. Job well done on this!
ReplyDeleteI love the sign, "The manhood you save...", it seems to me that, in a sub-culture like this, such a solicitation might draw more volunteers for the loss than monetary contributions for pursuing a cure.
ReplyDeleteI'm glad you all enjoyed it. This was one of the goofier ideas that pop up in my mind from time to time, and I decided to run with it.
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