Short Story

So recently I made a caption for someone on one of the other sites I visit.  Now, I generally enjoy the captions I make, but for some reason this one just really grabbed me.  There was something about it that just really got me going.  I found myself writing far more than could fit in a single panel.  I toyed around with the idea of expanding it into a story.  I ended up having a bit of free time, so I decided to just go ahead and do it.

You can find the story after the jump.  But, be aware that it is set in a world of anthropomorphic animals.  If that doesn't appeal to you, feel free to skip this one.  But if you do read it, please leave me a comment.  Did you like it, not like it, suggestions, constructive critisms.  Heck, write me a chapter?  Did it inspire you, do you have some new escapade for the characters to be involved with?  Share it with me.  Anything to let me know if this is something I should try to do again in the future.