Charging Up

Originally, this was supposed to be a caption.  However, the text started getting rather long, and I didn't have any other images that I could use to split it up.  I've noticed that, for some reason, when I post a longer caption on blogger, it does not post the full resolution, and the text comes out blurry.  So I decided that I would do this one as a story snippet with an image instead.

This one is loosely based on a combination of two things.  One is the anime/manga Fairy Tail (which is where the artwork originated).  The other is a story I idea I had had previously.  I took the main element of that idea and rewrote it to suit the mechanics of the new setting I was using here.  I won't say more about it right now, so as not to spoil the caption, and I may still go back and develop the original story some time in the future.

Story follows the jump.

Short Story

So recently I made a caption for someone on one of the other sites I visit.  Now, I generally enjoy the captions I make, but for some reason this one just really grabbed me.  There was something about it that just really got me going.  I found myself writing far more than could fit in a single panel.  I toyed around with the idea of expanding it into a story.  I ended up having a bit of free time, so I decided to just go ahead and do it.

You can find the story after the jump.  But, be aware that it is set in a world of anthropomorphic animals.  If that doesn't appeal to you, feel free to skip this one.  But if you do read it, please leave me a comment.  Did you like it, not like it, suggestions, constructive critisms.  Heck, write me a chapter?  Did it inspire you, do you have some new escapade for the characters to be involved with?  Share it with me.  Anything to let me know if this is something I should try to do again in the future.