Split Personality

Ok, first off I admit I stole the idea of the personality tied to the eyepatch idea from an anime.  I thought it was an interesting concept and took it a bit further.  However, I think I liked the idea of this one better than the execution.  I'm not entirely happy with how it turned out.  For starters, the text didn't flow right in my mind.  It just seems to read awkwardly.  Secondly, the dragon in the background just doesn't fit into things.  I wish I could remove it, but lack the skill to do so.  But, again, I might as well share it.